Take three...
Jul. 21st, 2008 01:29 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
martinlivingsSo, after comments from a few readers (including ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
mikandra, thanks!), I've changed the story yet again. Not much textually, but the structure has transmogrified once more. I'm not even going to try and describe it this time. Now I just have to rewrite the text a bit to suit the new format, try to make it... better than it is... and then send it off. Maybe.
I swear, I've put more work into this one story than I do into most novel drafts. *twitch* It's going to be a relief to get working on something else at last! Anything else!
mikandra, thanks!), I've changed the story yet again. Not much textually, but the structure has transmogrified once more. I'm not even going to try and describe it this time. Now I just have to rewrite the text a bit to suit the new format, try to make it... better than it is... and then send it off. Maybe.I swear, I've put more work into this one story than I do into most novel drafts. *twitch* It's going to be a relief to get working on something else at last! Anything else!
